Talk:Express Yourself (Madonna song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sauloviegas (talk · contribs) 16:29, 8 October 2011 (UTC)

• Going to review this pretty soon. - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 16:29, 8 October 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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The article is fantastic, and almost no issues were found.

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

• The only thing that I found weird was "descending down" on the Chart performance section.
• Missing quotation marks on the blockquote of the subsection Background.
• order/chaos, male/femalegood/evil, light/dark -> order/chaos, male/female, good/evil, light/dark

  Everything has been fixed. - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 14:23, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   There is one dead link that needs to be fixed.

2. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

4. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

   For now, the article seems to be stable.

5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   The possible deletion of the pictured placed on the sub-section Synopsis is still being discussed.

6. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   The prose is excellent and almost everything is good, the addressed issues just need to be fixed in order to promote the article. Also, a consensus on the possible deletion of the image mentioned needs to be done.

Made the necessary changes. Thank you Saulo, for reviewing the article. As for the screenshot, I don't think I can do anything. The discussion should be closed soon. Thanks again, Novice7 (talk) 13:08, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

You're welcome. :) I'm just waiting for someone to close the discussion of the screenshot. - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 14:23, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

Passing... - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 14:59, 24 October 2011 (UTC)

Thank you :) Novice7 (talk) 04:55, 25 October 2011 (UTC)