Talk:Erwin Arnada/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gilderien (talk · contribs) 22:29, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

• Thanks for offering to review. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:44, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

Initial thoughts

• Not a quick-fail
• "Arnada applied to be a photographer for the daily newspaper Kompas." is not in the citation given.

• Coulda sworn I had added it. Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

• for filmography.

• Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

• The way you have set up the references is somewhat bizarre. Why?

--Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 15:24, 16 June 2013 (UTC)

• Not bizarre, standard for articles I've written (short footnote style); it makes the article text a heck of a lot easier to read in edit mode. Compare FAs Andjar Asmara, Gagak Item, Sair Tjerita Siti Akbari, Chrisye, etc. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

Right ok. I have re-read it and I think it meets all the criteria. Although having images is not part of the GA criteria, I would recommend adding them if they are freely available, although my somewhat cursory search failed to turn up any.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality: Yes. -

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources: Yes, with short style listing multiple online sources -

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: Since there are no images, this does not apply.

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: doesn't seem to be possible so technically

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

--Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 12:17, 23 June 2013 (UTC)