Talk:Endometrial cancer
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In premenopausal women who are not on birth control, the cause of endometrial cancer is overwhelmingly most likely to be lack of periods -- either significantly fewer periods than normal or completely absent periods. This causes a buildup of the uterine lining (endometrium) over time, and is known as endometrial hyperplasia. You first need to have endometrial hyperplasia to get endometrial cancer, yet most cases of endometrial hyperplasia will not become cancerous. Is this correct? 2601:98A:480:C080:289C:A68F:6403:3EFF (talk) 06:55, 29 April 2020 (UTC)
Refs over one line or many
editMost people prefer them over one line thus I would request that User:Headbomb revert his edits here [1] Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 02:42, 28 July 2014 (UTC)
Belated points
edit- The Sasa et al 2011 BMJ review says "Two investigations are mandatory in women with suspected endometrial cancer: a transvaginal ultrasound scan and an endometrial biopsy." Article currently says "Transvaginal ultrasound to examine the endometrial thickness in women with postmenopausal bleeding is increasingly being used to aid in the diagnosis of endometrial cancer." which is rather different. If this a national difference between guidelines we should indicate so.
- Yep, that appears to be a trans-Atlantic thing, since Hoffman et al. is an American textbook (as far as I can tell). I've clarified the difference in the text now. Keilana|Parlez ici 00:08, 20 August 2014 (UTC)
- Sasa et al sets out a trans-Atlantic difference re surgery. Article: "Lymphadenectomy, or removal of pelvic and para-aortic lymph nodes, is performed for tumors of grade II or above." Sasa (in FIGO stage 1): "The subject of pelvic lymphadenectomy is disputed across the Atlantic. In the UK, pelvic lymphadenectomy is not routinely performed along with total abdominal hysterectomy and bilateral salpingo-oophorectomy in women with stage I disease. This stance is supported by a Cochrane Collaboration review, ... In the United States, however, the opposite applies and pelvic lymphadenectomy is routinely performed alongside total abdominal hysterectomy and bilateral salpingo-oophorectomy. A large retrospective observational study ....". Is Sasa out of date? Maybe expand coverage somewhat?
- @Wiki CRUK John: I think part of the issue here is that that particular sentence is referring to the histologic grade of the tumor instead of the stage. I've added a sentence about the trans-Atlantic difference between pelvic lymphadenectomy as it relates to staging, in any case. Does that look okay? Keilana|Parlez ici 00:14, 20 August 2014 (UTC)
- Oops, sorry, mixed the 2 up, not for the first time. Your changes cover this point & the last point nicely. Wiki CRUK John (talk) 11:02, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
- The ESMO Guidelines (Colombo, Preti et al) apparently were revised in 2013, see here, beyond the 2011 version now cited. Don't know what changes.
- @Wiki CRUK John: Hey, so I incorporated all the new information from the 2013 version, but there were two pieces of information included in the previous one that weren't in the latest version. Do you think they can stay, or should I remove them? Thanks, Keilana|Parlez ici 02:44, 25 August 2014 (UTC)
- I could rewrite the epidemiology section from the latest World Cancer Report 2014, which has more info, but I'm reluctance to mix and match with what is there - eg the WCR uses "North America" not US, and so on.
- @Wiki CRUK John: Hi again, I incorporated all this information. It's not terribly well written yet but that will happen soon. :) Thanks for all these comments! Keilana|Parlez ici 01:53, 26 August 2014 (UTC)
- More later, plus I hope soon by others here (these are just me). Wiki CRUK John (talk) 14:26, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
Lead image
editThe "c blausen" needs to be removed from the image Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 14:40, 24 August 2014 (UTC)
- @Jmh649: Unfortunately, I have approximately 0 photoshop skills.... I could give it a shot but it would probably involve MS Paint... Keilana|Parlez ici 15:33, 24 August 2014 (UTC)
- My dad loves doing this sort of stuff. Let me see if I can convince him. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 21:31, 24 August 2014 (UTC)
- I managed to do it with paint. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 09:50, 25 August 2014 (UTC)
- @Jmh649: You are fantastic! Keilana|Parlez ici 13:56, 25 August 2014 (UTC)
- I managed to do it with paint. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 09:50, 25 August 2014 (UTC)
- My dad loves doing this sort of stuff. Let me see if I can convince him. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 21:31, 24 August 2014 (UTC)
CRUK review
editI have had the feedback on this now, and have a marked-up print out. In general it was thought pretty good, and these are relatively minor points. I think I'll just make the smaller changes re wording etc myself now, but do say if there are any you have problems with. Then I'll list more complex things here. Wiki CRUK John (talk) 15:54, 29 August 2014 (UTC)
- Ok, done that here -[2]
- "Risk factors" - was thought too short - [me] I think this means not enough on age, but this is below in the epidemiology section, as we usually do it. I wonder if it might be better to move it up to here though -seems more logical.
- Hmm, I've heard both sides - epidemiology AND risk factors. I don't know what the standard is and I don't want to be repetitive, do you have an idea for how to deal with that?
- "A 1-2 year course of tamoxifen approximately doubles the risk of endometrial cancer, and a 5-year course of therapy quadruples that risk" - true but thought a bit scary for tamoxifen-takers - basic risk is fairly low. Ideally start this section with what overall risk is.
- Done - lifetime risk of 2-3% is now the lead sentence.
- Pathophysiology was not checked, nor I think Epidemiology
- "Diagnosis" - mention blood tests for CA125"
- Done.
- "Add-on therapy" (is this a common term?) Take Chemo/radio etc bits a bit slower to make the different options rather clearer: single/combined, before/after. Maybe divide up the section.
- It's technically called "adjuvant therapy" but we tried to simplify the language a little. I've added both names and cleaned up the pacing a little. Better?
- "Mutations in mismatch repair genes can lead to resistance against platins." - explain this means chemo won't work for those with certain genetics.
- Done.
- "high-risk" & "early-stage" could be explained
- I glossed the first instances of both, should I explain it every time?
- Para beginning "Hormonal therapy is" reads as a bit contradictory, though factually correct: "most cases" vs. "25%". Maybe reword.
- I've beat on it a little, and I think it sucks less.
- PARP inhibitors are new, and not often used in UK.
- Yeah they are, I've added some more information from recent reviews.
- "Research" could do with expanding - there are other things mentioned on the CRUK page.
- I've incorporated all of that! Thanks for pointing me there!
- That's it. Wiki CRUK John (talk) 16:31, 29 August 2014 (UTC)
- Technically term is "adjunctive therapy". I have heard it referred to as "add on therapy" Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 11:55, 30 August 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you SO MUCH for this review! I could not be more grateful. Keilana|Parlez ici 23:25, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
- Technically term is "adjunctive therapy". I have heard it referred to as "add on therapy" Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 11:55, 30 August 2014 (UTC)
- That's it. Wiki CRUK John (talk) 16:31, 29 August 2014 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: Kirill Lokshin (talk · contribs) 11:03, 30 August 2014 (UTC)
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | The prose is good, but a bit dense in places, although this is to be expected for a topic of this nature. The statistics in the fourth paragraph in the "Pathophysiology" section (beginning with "Type I and type II cancers...") are difficult to follow in prose form; perhaps moving them to a table would improve the flow? | |
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | No issues with any of the style guidelines. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | Appropriate references are provided, all of which appear to meet the requirements of WP:MEDRS. | |
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | Good use of citations throughout. The citation density varies significantly between sections (for example, while most sections average one citation per 1–3 sentences, the "Endometrioid adenocarcinoma" section has one citation per paragraph); while this is not necessarily a problem, it's unclear whether it was done deliberately. | |
2c. it contains no original research. | All of the material appears to be appropriately derived from reliable secondary sources. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | Good coverage of the various elements of the topic. I note that an expert review by CRUK has not identified any significant deficiencies in coverage. | |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | Generally well-focused, although certain sections ("Risk factors", "Pathophysiology") go into greater detail than others ("Classification"). | |
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | No neutrality issues. | |
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | No stability issues. | |
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | All images appear to be appropriately tagged; no fair-use images are present. | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | Good use of images throughout. Some of the image alignments behave oddly on lower screen resolutions, particularly in the "Staging" section; I would suggest not mixing gallery and floating image alignments within the same section. | |
7. Overall assessment. | Overall, an excellent article that covers the topic well and is understandable by someone without a medical background. I recommend focusing on prose quality and flow, as well as expanding some of the shorter sections, to further enhance the article before a potential FAC. |
Hiding refs in the lead
editNot sure why? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 20:01, 29 September 2014 (UTC)
- @Jmh649: Discussion with reviewers at FAC, they said it was intimidating. I don't have strong feelings either way. Keilana|Parlez ici 14:23, 30 September 2014 (UTC)
- Can you provide a link? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 14:40, 30 September 2014 (UTC)
- @Jmh649: here, I thought that was just a proposal for MEDMOS for now? Or has that changed? I can't keep up with all of this.... Keilana|Parlez ici 18:22, 30 September 2014 (UTC)
- Can you provide a link? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 14:40, 30 September 2014 (UTC)
See also section
edit- These are not recommended in high quality articles per WP:MEDMOS
- Terms that are already in an article should not be in a see also section per WP:SEE ALSO
Thus removed this section. Let me know if I have missed anything.Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 04:32, 14 October 2014 (UTC)
Endometrial cancer for Today's Featured Article
editI've set-up Endometrial cancer as a blurb for the Today's Featured Article requests process.
You can see it at Wikipedia:Today's featured article/requests/Endometrial cancer.
However, as I myself have nominated a bunch of other articles lately, I won't actually transclude it at Wikipedia:Today's featured article/requests.
If anyone else wishes to do so, they can follow the instructions at Wikipedia:Today's featured article/requests, and then a discussion will start as to the article's consideration for the Main Page.
Thank you,
Primary sources
editHave moved this here "Heart disease is the most common cause of death among endometrial cancer survivors [1]. Obesity does not seem to play a role in prognosis of early stage endometrial cancer survivors [2]."
As it is supported by primary sources.
This secondary source disagrees that obesity does not affect prognosis in survivors.[3] Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 23:33, 21 November 2014 (UTC)
- @Doc James: Hey, thanks for picking up on that. I don't remember adding that, but I also have only consumed one coffee this morning. Since the secondary source is from 2009 and the research is from 2012, I could put that sentence in #Research as something like "2012 research showed that heart disease was the most common cause of death among endometrial cancer survivors, though this relationship has not been confirmed." How does that sound? Keilana|Parlez ici 15:50, 22 November 2014 (UTC)
- Wasn't your edit. Have added back a bit of it. Feel free to remove that two though. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 15:52, 22 November 2014 (UTC)
References
- ^ Ward, KK; Shah, NR; Saenz, CC; McHale, MT; Alvarez, EA; Plaxe, SC (August 2012). "Cardiovascular disease is the leading cause of death among endometrial cancer patients". Gynecologic oncology. 126 (2): 176–9. PMID 22507532.
- ^ Crosbie, EJ; Roberts, C; Qian, W; Swart, AM; Kitchener, HC; Renehan, AG (April 2012). "Body mass index does not influence post-treatment survival in early stage endometrial cancer: results from the MRC ASTEC trial". European journal of cancer (Oxford, England : 1990). 48 (6): 853–64. PMID 22100903.
Review by SandyGeorgia
editSourcing
editResolved. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:05, 8 December 2014 (UTC) |
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I don't want to litter an FA with tags, but book sources need page numbers. This source is cited dozens of times, with no page nos.
This citation (and other web sources) is incomplete (date, volume, accessdate, etc)
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Prose
editDone. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:05, 8 December 2014 (UTC) |
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Not sure why white is lower case, Black upper, and should the term African American be used instead? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 20:02, 6 December 2014 (UTC)
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LEAD
editDone. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 00:51, 9 December 2014 (UTC) |
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See Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/December 9, 2014 SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:29, 8 December 2014 (UTC)
Are we done here now? If so, please feel free to hat/hab? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:09, 8 December 2014 (UTC) |
Birth control clarification
editDone. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:07, 8 December 2014 (UTC) |
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The lead says:
I cannot find that in the first citation given, and the second is not an online source. The body of the article says:
And the sources given for this section are different than those used in the lead. One says:
This stands out to me because combo therapy is controversial; some ob/gyns and endocrinologists give progesterone and estrogen separately. This needs to be sorted. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:00, 8 December 2014 (UTC)
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Another (related) matter
editDone. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 00:51, 9 December 2014 (UTC) |
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Probably best taken up at WT:MED, but I don't know why the FA menstrual cycle is linked nowhere in this article, relative to the c-class menstruation, which is linked. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 18:03, 8 December 2014 (UTC)
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Endometriosis
editThis is at endometriosis:
- Despite similarities in their name and location, endometriosis bears no relationship to endometrial cancer.[5]
Is it worthy of mention here? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:55, 6 December 2014 (UTC)
- @SandyGeorgia: I think this is adequately addressed with the section on endometrial hyperplasia but I wouldn't be opposed to a hatnote or something. Keilana|Parlez ici 16:02, 8 December 2014 (UTC)
References
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was invoked but never defined (see the help page). - ^ Rowlands, IJ; Nagle, CM; Spurdle, AB; Webb, PM; Australian National Endometrial Cancer Study Group; Australian Ovarian Cancer Study Group (Dec 2011). "Gynecological conditions and the risk of endometrial cancer". Gynecol Oncol. 3: 537–41.
Should we choose a less disturbing image for the Main Page?
editI was somewhat nauseated by the appearance of this bloody medical photograph, which appears as the first image on the main page today. Should we display a different image from this article on the Main Page? Jarble (talk) 06:17, 9 December 2014 (UTC)
- I would choose a micrograph. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 06:43, 9 December 2014 (UTC)
- I don't really see an issue with the current picture. --Guerillero | My Talk 07:02, 9 December 2014 (UTC)
- Accuracy is great, but I agree - maybe a little too real — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.88.35.154 (talk) 08:07, 9 December 2014 (UTC)
- I believe in drawing people to an article, not driving them away with disturbing imagery. I'm a cancer survivor so I know how ugly this disease can be but many people are going to be unsettled by the bloody image and it seems a poor choice.Rob Banzai (talk) 19:11, 9 December 2014 (UTC)
- Accuracy is great, but I agree - maybe a little too real — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.88.35.154 (talk) 08:07, 9 December 2014 (UTC)
- Yes we should have done for the main age, and probably should still change it. Apart from anything else, like most such images it doesn't really convey anything much to those not medically trained. I don't believe in micrographs as lead pics either, for the same reason; these only convey anything to pathologists etc, and we rarely explain them at all. In a case like this a diagram showing where the endometrium is (not exactly common knowledge) is usually the best choice. But I have some potential COI, as many of such images are CRUK releases, though far from all. Wiki CRUK John (talk) 14:05, 10 December 2014 (UTC)
- Oh, I forgot we have a very decent Blausen diagram as the actual lead pic in the article. It was a mistake not to use that or similar on the TFA blub. Wiki CRUK John (talk) 14:11, 10 December 2014 (UTC)
- I don't really see an issue with the current picture. --Guerillero | My Talk 07:02, 9 December 2014 (UTC)
- I would choose a micrograph. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 06:43, 9 December 2014 (UTC)
References
editMoved this here
edit"Neither endometrial biopsy nor dilation and curettage is sufficiently accurate to rule out endometrial carcinoma.[1]"
I have read parts of the paper and unable to find the bit that supports this?Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 03:01, 17 March 2015 (UTC)
- @Doc James: I don't remember adding this, since I don't format citations like that. I think whoever added that was looking at: "Several methods of endometrial sampling are used in the different studies and over time. Although some authors have reported similar diagnostic capability of different techniques,47 other authors found that the risk of cancer for women who had a biopsy was different to those who had a dilation and curettage 14,48 or hysteroscopic resection.", "In this study, patients with AEH who had a biopsy rather than hysterectomy showed a benign outcome." Williams Gyn says "As an alternative to sonography, Pipelle office biopsy or outpatient dilatation and curettage (D&C) may be initially selected for evaluation of abnormal bleeding (Merisio, 2005). Grossly, hyperplastic endometrium is not distinctive, and thus, direct visual identification using hysteroscopy is inaccurate (Garuti, 2006)." and "Office Pipelle biopsy is preferred for the initial evaluation of women with bleeding suspicious for malignancy (Feldman, 1993). However, if sampling techniques fail to provide sufficient diagnostic information or if abnormal bleeding persists, D&C may be required to clarify the diagnosis (Gordon, 1999)."
- Since the source given doesn't really support the statement (I read the whole study, very interesting), as it really just says that rates of carcinoma found on hysterectomy after a biopsy finds abnormal endometrial hyperplasia, I've removed that sentence. Thanks for pointing this out! Keilana|Parlez ici 18:18, 17 March 2015 (UTC)
- Yes was added here [6] Waiting for User:Akram1988 to justify the addition. Doc James (talk · contribs · email)
- User:Akram1988 the ref says that in those with a precancerous lesion these do not exclude cancer. It does not say they do not exclude cancer in those with no precancerous lesion. Also please use secondary sources. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 01:16, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
- Yes was added here [6] Waiting for User:Akram1988 to justify the addition. Doc James (talk · contribs · email)
Thombocytosis and hyperglycaemia
editThe new NICE guideline for suspected cancer (http://www.nice.org.uk/guidance/NG12, page 160-166 of the full guideline) discusses warning signs for endometrial cancer and when to perform gynaecological ultrasound. In women over 55 USS is suggested in those with unexplained vaginal discharge (when presenting de novo or if associated with thrombocytosis or hyperglycaemia) or those with haematuria (associated with either anaemia or thrombocytosis or hyperglycaemia). This is largely based on doi:10.3399/bjgp13X671632 which itself is a primary source. Worth discussing the relevance of these features? JFW | T@lk 14:03, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
Lancet seminar
editdoi:10.1016/S0140-6736(15)00130-0 Might be useful to match this with the current content. JFW | T@lk 13:10, 11 March 2016 (UTC)
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