Talk:Emily Engstler/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Sportsfan77777 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 14:39, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
I'll review. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 14:39, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
- leading her team in rebounds and blocks <<<=== Mention the number of blocks per game
- You could mention her sister in conjunction with the weight loss.
- I would also suggest clarifying that she lost weight in order to build muscle (or something like that). Otherwise, it sounds like a potentially unhealthy thing to lose that much weight.
- Close the college career section with "Through January 29th, she is averaging... [stats] ...in her senior season."
That's it! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 14:53, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
- @Sportsfan77777: Done, except for the senior season stats, as stats usually are not included until the end of the season and would otherwise require updates. Sportzeditz (talk) 15:50, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
- Okay, passing, good work! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:48, 29 January 2022 (UTC)