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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Yifeng Qi, Stellazz.

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Proposal to move the etymology explained in "Clinical Significance" to the lead section

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As I read through this article, all I could think of is "why the heck is it called that? What does that term refer to? Where's the danger?!?" Despite that the article is indeed quite short, I would propose that the explanation of what the term (danger space) is referring to be moved higher up in the article, so users/readers aren't reading with the mental distraction of "dangerous to what? Where's the danger coming from?"

  • Actually, considering the low hit-rate and views (as calculated from Wikipedia:Web statistics tool, specifically toollabs:pageviews), I'm going to go ahead and do that now, but leave this comment/edit in case it is a controversial edit (i.e. not of high enough significance for that information to be in the Lead Section)


Instead of "median space without a midline raphe" is there a better way to communicate this? I'm no expert but have completed all the pre-med classes with A grades and still don't fully understand what this means about not having a "raphe," therefore it stands to reason that the common person passing through may similarly be confused as to what exactly someone is meaning by "raphe" here. Septum? Divider? Barrier? Some alternate word could probably capture the concept better. Alternatively, the concept could/should be added directly to the Wikipedia page for Raphe, so that it's clear what's being referred to. PolymathGirl (talk) 03:14, 6 December 2016 (UTC)Reply
Good point, that was completely incomprehensible, I have changed the lead. --Tom (LT) (talk) 04:24, 6 December 2016 (UTC)Reply