The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Teguh Karya had to fight for Christine Hakim's right to act in Cinta Pertama (First Love) after his producer said her breasts were too small?
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''One of these films was Eros Djarot's 1988 film Tjoet Nja' Dhien, in which Hakim was cast as Cut Nyak Dhien, an Acehnese guerilla leader, which won the 1989 Cannes Film Festival award for Best International Film, being screened in Le Semaine de Critique. would be better split into smaller sentences as the subject becomes confused.
Hakim later described the role as a "huge honour" and "very challenging"; she also credits the role for answering her questions on her identity. confusion of tense.
In producing the film, she chose young director Garin Nugroho for his talent and took the leading role. ungrammatical.
''Aside from acting, Hakim is also a documentary filmmaker. . ungrammatical
She has also begun producing a documentary on the Dayak people of Kalimantan When, be specific.
The prose could do with a copy-edit throughout to improve the flow.
I've done a copyedit. Hopefully it is up to par now. Crisco 1492 (talk)