Talk:Carancahua Bay

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Sasata in topic GA Review
Good articleCarancahua Bay has been listed as one of the Geography and places good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
July 20, 2010Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on June 24, 2010.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the town of Carancahua on Carancahua Bay in Texas avoided growth because of the site's propensity for flooding and malaria?

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sasata (talk) 19:32, 20 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

Hi, I've picked up this review. Looks pretty good, just a few comments and suggestions:

  • lead: link Texas, confluence
  • History: link/define Tejas; 2000 census; gated community
  • "oddly shaped Piper Lakes" what's odd about their shape?
  • should give metric conversions for distances
  • "Carancahua Bay is protected by the State of Texas" would protected area be a useful link here?
  • 300 member -> should be hyphenated
  • link pH
  • link shrimping
  • "save for a small slither of water" should this be "sliver"?
  • "believed to contain 33 Billion Cubic Feet of natural gas" why the capitals? (and needs metric conversion)
  • "to develop ten reserves in the area" what is a reserve?
Thank you for the review. I believe I have addressed all concerns.--William S. Saturn (talk) 22:39, 20 July 2010 (UTC)Reply
I think the article meets all the GA criteria, so I shall promote it now. Sasata (talk) 23:31, 20 July 2010 (UTC)Reply