Talk:Brian Traxler/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 06:00, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• Presumably he only got one start in the big leagues, since he only played parts of three games at 1st, and two of them were as late-inning replacements and there's no DH in the NL? Maybe find a way to work that in there somewhere, if it can be supported?
• "In nine games with the Dodgers, he batted .091 with one hit and four strikeouts in 11 at bats." - move the link for strikeouts up to where it says that Tewksbury struck him out
• "In 1993, he pitched two games for the Dukes, winning one of them, though his ERA was 11.57" - link ERA for the benefit of those non baseball fans reading the article
• First paragraph of the NPB section is uncited
• Move the link for the V. J. Keefe Stadium up from the personal life section to the death section where it is mentioned.
• The last four sections are all extremely short. I'd recommend trying to find a way to condense these into two or more sections. The personality should be able to fit in with the personal life pretty well. Combining coaching and death may seem a little odd, but would a section title like "Final years" or something work for that?
• The source " Chinese Taiwan language data" is a wiki and doesn't seem to be reliable.
• The sole image meets fair use criteria
• Other sources except for the one mentioned above look fine.

Good work, placing this one on hold. Hog Farm _Talk 16:24, 3 July 2021 (UTC)