Talk:Bhagwan Mahaveer Cancer Hospital and Research Centre

Notability

See Wikipedia:WikiProject Hospitals/Tutorials#Notability for notability criteria for hospital articles. -- Talk to G Moore 01:56, 5 July 2020 (UTC)

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Improvements

@Sunnykathuria1985: I assume that Wikipedia has default restrictions on Google but I don't know for sure.

• This article could be improved by adding inline references to each paragraph or statement of facts. The sections on "Associated facilities and programs" and "Services for international patients" have no inline referencing.
• It could also use an image of the hospital in the infobox vice just a logo image. The image needs to be free of copyrights.
• The article should be written in a Neutral Point of View (NPOV). For instance: "The hospital has been flourishing under the chairmanship of Shri Navrattan Kothari, who has devoted his life to the service of the poor." This sentence could be more factual. How do you know it is flourishing? How long and what has Kothari been doing for the poor and where.
• The Milestones section should be expanded into paragraphs for each milestone with inline referencing.
• If you use an abbreviation, spell it out the first time it occurs. What is AML ward? What is OT?
• Are all relevant categories included? I added Category:Hospitals established in 1997 and Category:Hospitals in Rajasthan. Are there categories for the city where the hospital is located?
• Add Wiki Links to topics used in the article. For instance, I added links to Hospital and Cancer. Are there other topics that have articles in Wikipedia?
• Add other parameters from Template:Infobox hospital that are not currently included in the article. I generally just add the full blank copy of the template and fill in the parameters that are relevant. For instance, the constructed parameter could be added.
• What is a multi-specialty hospital? What is a super-specialty hospital? This should be defined in a footnote or separate article. Is a multi-specialty hospital the same thing as a General hospital?

I hope this helps you getting started. -- Talk to G Moore 11:19, 20 July 2020 (UTC)