Talk:Better Call Saul season 2/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Heartfox (talk · contribs) 03:57, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Review forthcoming. Heartfox (talk) 03:57, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• (Rhea Seehorn), is comma unnecessary

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• Jonathan Banks also reprises his role as Mike Ehrmantraut, who is engaged in a feud with the Mexican drug cartel after a staged altercation with Tuco Salamanca (Raymond Cruz), which was paid for by Nacho Varga (Michael Mando), lands Tuco in prison and draws Hector's (Mark Margolis) attention to Mike. I'm kind of confused; could this be split into 2 sentences/less commas?

 Done The Optimistic One (talk) 13:02, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• critics, and comma unnecessary

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• season 1, season 2 I think these numbers should be spelled out

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• ref 1 needs archiving/fix broken link

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 18:57, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• I guess you can keep them as is but I would personally italicize Vulture, Fansided, etc. (unless it was like amc.com or something which doesn't make sense to be)

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• All of the main cast returned for this season. Bob Odenkirk returns as Jimmy McGill, Jonathan Banks returns as Mike Ehrmantraut, Rhea Seehorn returns as Kim Wexler, Patrick Fabian returns as Howard Hamlin, Michael Mando as Nacho Varga, and Michael McKean returns as Chuck McGill, Jimmy's elder brother. can some refs be here?

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:36, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• Is there additional refs to ref 6 and 7 that apply to the second season?

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:36, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• Jimmy / Saul is hiding I would say "Jimmy hides"

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• is there a better source than newscastic for ref 7?

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:26, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• ref 8 publisher link is incorrect and not necessary (variety is okay alone)

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• if the cast (particularly the guest stars) had references for an episode they were in I think that would improve this article
• who previously appeared in the Breaking Bad episode "Open House". this is probably not indicated in the episode. is there a source?

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:26, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• reference works should be linked to available articles

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:06, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• plot summary for episodess 6, 7, 8 are over 200 max words in MOS:TVPLOT
• he's he is

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• claims to the DA not everyone knows what a DA is (link/unabbreviate)

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• he’s retiring MOS:CONTRACTIONS, also watch the quote mark (MOS:CURLY)

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• live aftershow MOS:SEAOFBLUE

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 18:58, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• second-season this is an odd form

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• use author-link=Mitch Metcalf in citations

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:00, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• SHOWBUZZDAILY’s it's okay to de-capitalize this (MOS:CAPS; also the full title includes "Updated:"

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:00, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• much like the previous is there a ref

 Done The Optimistic One (talk) 18:13, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• "Better Call Saul : Season 2" why is there a space after Saul

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• gave the season as a whole 8.7/10 rated the season an 8.7 out of 10. (I think "out of" is okay)

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• precision." the sentence doesn't end with "precision"; quote inside period.

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• second season, Better second season ... Better (there's a part of the sentence cut out here

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• praised the show be more specific

 Done The Optimistic One (talk) 18:13, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• 1 Live +7 ratings were not available, so Live +3 ratings have been used instead. consider writing "Live + seven-day DVR playback viewership was unavailable, so live + three-day is listed instead" for people unfamiliar with the term "Live + 7"

 Done The Optimistic One (talk) 18:03, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• Emmys.com consider publisher=Academy of Television Arts & Sciences instead

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• second-season (season two or second season or second season's is clearer)

 Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Placing on hold for seven days pending implementation of most suggestions above. Heartfox (talk) 05:03, 11 October 2020 (UTC)