Restored intro

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Changes to intro deleted important info and misattributed references, so I restored the original intro. Remainder of article, from second para forward, seems to be more of an argument about alcohol than a discussion about alcohol dementia, but I haven't the time to edit it now. Needs to be wikified.--TheEditrix2 14:05, 5 March 2008 (UTC)Reply


I completely agree, and I will try to help within the next few days if someone else doesn't get here first. I'm someone that doesn't drink alcohol at all, and would prefer a complete ban on it, and even I think that it's much too biased against alcohol consumption. Pipatron (talk) 11:25, 7 March 2008 (UTC)Reply

Deleted section on "What Alcohol Does to the Brain and Body". It's very good information, and probably belongs on Wikipedia, but it's peripheral to this particular article. It belongs in a separate article, or under the more general Alcohol article.--TheEditrix2 17:04, 7 March 2008 (UTC)Reply

Poor referencing

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The majority of the references in this article are from a single, overly simplified website. Please review. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 123.243.30.245 (talk) 11:54, 16 November 2009 (UTC)Reply

Yes it is in need of a rewrite. I have added some banners to the article.--Literaturegeek | T@1k? 16:57, 16 November 2009 (UTC)Reply

Can the writer or anyone who can help to clarify certain point

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I'm now translating this article into Traditional Chinese. I need clarification: "ARD patients often have symptoms of both forms, i.e. impaired ability to plan, apathy, and memory loss." while "Alcohol-related dementia presents as a global deterioration in intellectual function with memory not being specifically affected," ARD seemed to affect the memory to a great extent, but the 2nd statement says it doesn't. Can anybody help clarify? Thanks.ThomasYehYeh (talk) 08:05, 10 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: Technical and Scientific Communication

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 August 2022 and 9 December 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Brennam29 (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Brennam29 (talk) 23:20, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply