Talk:Afroyim v. Rusk/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Racepacket in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 18:43, 2 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    Well done. Remove bold on case name in footnotes (an artifact of the citation template, beyond our control).
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Explain in background section that § 401(e) of the Nationality Act of 1940 removes citizenship by voting in a foreign election, and that this case challenged the constitutionality of that law.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
    no edit wars.
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    Placing article on hold.

Good changes. Thank you for your prompt attention, and excellent work. Racepacket (talk) 20:11, 2 January 2011 (UTC)Reply