Talk:Abyssal plain/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Casliber in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 08:44, 6 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

Okay, I will make straightforward copyedits as I go. Please revert if I accidentally change the meaning. I will jot queries below. Casliber (talk · contribs) 08:44, 6 June 2010 (UTC)Reply


Other items needing attention:

  • Could summarise in lead in one or two sentences the biological makeup of life in the abyssal plains
  • Any other information on regional variation would be good to add
  • Para 5 of Formation section, paras 2 and 3 of Discovery section, para 1 after Cold seeps, para 10 of Biodiversity need inline references

Overall, pretty good. Some niggles above and I think you're there. Casliber (talk · contribs) 12:03, 6 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

Otherwise, looking pretty good.

Okay - passed overall. well done. Minor things left above not dealbreakers. Casliber (talk · contribs) 21:23, 26 June 2010 (UTC)Reply