Talk:A No No

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 00:54, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• The caption has the cover for which remix?
• Streaming and Digital Download → not on any source

 Done

Lead

• song recorded by American → remove recorded
• Hamilton. → Hamilton. Since the track samples "Crush on You" (1997), songwriting credits were added for a total of nine.
• for her → from her
• initially released as a promotional single, → add date, not mentioned in the body of the article
• The music video was released on March 8, 2019. → original or the remix?
• Mention the other music video and the chart as well

 Done

Background and composition

• "A No No" was written by Mariah Carey → "A No No" was initally written by Mariah Carey, Robert "Shea" Taylor and Priscilla Hamilton
• The song genres and lyrics on the first paragraph belong to the second
• "A No No" samples American rapper Lil' Kim's 1997 single "Crush on You",[6] → Since it sampled Lil' Kim's 1997 single "Crush on You", she received writing credits with Christopher Wallace, Andreao Heard. "Crush on You" had sampled "Rain Dance" by the Jeff Lorber Fusion (written by Jeff Lorber) from his 1979 album, Water Sign, so Lorber was added as a songwriter. + wikilink (sampled) (this should also be in the first paragraph)
• The infobox has Mason Betha and Camron Giles as songwriters, which other song this sampled? Or are they also writters for the first sample?
• Source 20 (Rolling Stone) makes a mention fo the lyrics, add it here

 Done

Release and remixes

• Should mention it was released as a promo single
• critics → music critics
• Shawni delivers two guest verses, interpolating a now instantly recognizable section of Lauryn Hill’s “Ex-Factor” into one of them → should also be added here (according to the Rolling Stone source of the music video section)
• Idolator source has more on the Shawni version

 Done

Critical reception

• Critical reception → Reception (as it also mentions the chart)
• "A No No" charted at number 17 on the US R&B Digital Songs chart. → source

 Done

Music videos

• The Idolator source of the Shawni remix goes into detail regarding the music video.

 Done

Live performances

• The archive link of Idolator doesn't work

 Done

Credits and personnel

• Fine

Charts

• Link is broken
• Remove the sortable plainrowheaders

 Done

Release history

• The Guardian Nigeria doesn't call A No No a single
• The song was also added to the mainstream R&B/hip-hop radios
• unwikilink the label

 Done

References

• Wikilik the first instance of Idolator and not the fourth

 Done

External links

• Fine

Overall

• You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:01, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

• I believe everything is addressed. Please let me know if anything else needs to be done. Regards, NØ 16:54, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

Google Play music source you provided doesn't have the original date of release, just put the guardian nigeria one back there. On top of that, it should indicate it was a first promotional single. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 01:10, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

When scrolled under the comments, it says "Released: November 1, 2018" on the Google Play link. Not sure what the random date being shown at the top is.—NØ 01:16, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

The google play music source has some problem, just do as I told you and on't forget to indicate it was a first promotional single. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 01:26, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

@MaranoFan: I made changes to the article, see if you are ok with them and if you want to add anything else. I believe the amazon.com source provides what is needed for the song.MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:41, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

The format is ok. Looks odd to leave the label blank considering Carey is only signed to Epic Records, but not a big deal either way.—NØ 17:12, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

I know but the truth is that the Billboard article doesn't say anything regarding a label. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:10, 26 April 2020 (UTC)