Talk:A Little More Personal (Raw)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 01:33, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose):
   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references):
   b (citations to reliable sources):
   c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects):
   b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• Information is needed in the article to support that the genre of the album is pop rock

Lead

• ...including at MTV's Total Request Live, The Ellen DeGeneres Show and the American Music Awards of 2005. → Change "American Music Awards of 2005" to "2005 American Music Awards" to make prose flow better

Background and recording

• ...for which he was charged with driving under the influence of alcohool.[4] → Fix spelling issue

Reception

• "A Little More Personal (Raw)" debuted at number twenty on Billboard 200... → Add "the" between "on" and "Billboard"
• ...same position on Billboard Digital Albums, dropping the chart on the following.[13] → Add "week" at the end of the sentence to clarify prose
• As of May 2008, the album has sold additional 305,000 copies in the United States, and failed to chart in other countries.[16] Add "an" between "sold" and "additional"; Add "has" between "and" and "failed"

Promotion

• The tour, however, didn't happen for unknown reasons. → Verifiable?
• ...and her cover of "Edge of Seventeen" in the American Music Awards of 2005.[19] → Change "American Music Awards of 2005" to "2005 American Music Awards"

Track listing

• Find a source to verify all of the information in this section

Credits and personnel

• No issues

Charts and certifications

• No issues

References

• References 1, 6, 19, 22 → "MTV" should not be italicized; "Viacom" should be the publisher

• Publisher fixed. Although, the {{cite web}} template writes MTV instead of MTV; so i can't fix it.

• Reference 3 → "IGN" should not be italicized

• It's a {{cite web}} issue I can't fix, since IGN goes on "work", and the template italicizes work by default.

• Reference 4 → Same as issue for Reference 1; Publisher should not be wiki-linked as it was already in an earlier source
  • Done.
• Reference 7 → "Jann Wenner" should be wiki-linked as it is publisher of Rolling Stone magazine

• Done

• Reference 20 → "About.com" should not be italicized
  • Explained above.
• Reference 21 → "iTunes Store" should not be italicized
  • Explained above.
• Reference 23 → Same issue as Reference 21; Both should not be wiki-linked as they were done so already in another reference
  • dewiki-linked all. The other issue explained above.
• Reference 25 → "Billboard" and "Prometheus Global Media" should not be wiki-linked
  • Done.

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are some minor prose issues, citation questions, and reference formatting issues that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to address these issues and/or discuss points which you believe may not concern the good article criteria. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 02:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Think i've fixed all and explained what i can't fix. Thanks for the review. —Hahc21 01:59, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 06:22, 22 June 2012 (UTC)