Talk:A-Yo (Lady Gaga song)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 19:10, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

• Grabbing for a review. Aoba47 (talk) 19:10, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• I believe the quotes in the lead require citation.
• I would reduce this part (In order to promote the track's release) down to (To promote the track’s release) for more concise language.

Background and release

• For this part (On her Twitter account Gaga), a comma is needed between “account” and “Gaga”.

Recording and composition

• For this part (Lindsey as additional co-writer), I believe you need either “an” or “the” before the word “additional”.

Critical reception

• Everything looks good here.

Chart performance

• Good work here.

Live performances

• For this part (For "A-Yo" Ronson), I comma is necessary between the song’s title and “Ronson”.
• For this part (she played on a special guitar), I do not believe that “on” is necessary.

References

• Vancouver Weekly is a red link. That is not an issue as I am assuming it is intentional, but I just wanted to let you know that it was there.

Final comments

• Great work with the article. A majority of my comments are rather nitpicky, and should be resolved quite easily. I will pass this once my comments are addressed. Have a great rest of your week! Aoba47 (talk) 22:21, 13 November 2018 (UTC)
  • @Aoba47: all done. Thanks for the quick review. Did some little bit of paraphrasing also while addressing your comments. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 10:02, 14 November 2018 (UTC)

Verdict

• I am glad that I could help. I will ✓ Pass this as a GA. Aoba47 (talk) 19:36, 14 November 2018 (UTC)

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