Talk:40th Division (United Kingdom)

Latest comment: 15 years ago by AustralianRupert in topic Improvements

Improvements

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I have completed the B class checklist and believe that this is a Start class article as I believe it fails B class criteria 1, 2 and 3. I believe that it could be improved by addressing the following issues:

  • Referencing: for a successful B class review an article needs at least one inline citation (more if multiple sources were used) per paragraph or block of information (e.g. table or list);
  • Coverage: the article could be expanded to discuss the major actions in which the Division was involved in more detail;
  • Structure: the article would be improved by the addition of a lead or introduction section that concisely summarises the entire article;
  • Supporting materials: the article could be improved by adding some images and or expanding the information in the Infobox.

Just a few ideas. Once you feel that it is ready for re-assessment, please add it to the list at WP:MHA. If you would like more in depth comments, please consider submitting the article to peer review at WP:MHPR. Hope this helps. AustralianRupert (talk) 07:14, 20 April 2009 (UTC)Reply