Talk:33rd Division (United Kingdom)

Latest comment: 15 years ago by AustralianRupert in topic Possible improvements

Test of new infobox

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This is a test of the new Infobox Military Unit. Comments?

33rd Division
 
ActiveWorld War I
July 1915 -30 June 1919
CountryUnited Kingdom
BranchNew Army
Part ofK4 Army Group
EngagementsBattle of the Somme (1916)
   o Battle of Bazentin Ridge
   o Battle of High Wood
Battle of Arras
Third Battle of Ypres

Conversion completed: Converted infobox to new Infobox Military Unit as part of Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history. —ERcheck @ 01:16, 28 April 2006 (UTC)Reply


Possible improvements

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I have completed the B class checklist and feel that this article could be improved by addressing the following issues:

  • Referencing: each paragraph or block of information requires a source for verification purposes, this can be achieved by including in-line citations;
  • Coverage: the article currently has a unit history section, however, there is nothing in it. If this could be completed, it would serve to balance the article and provide a comprehensive coverage of the topic;
  • Supporting materials: a photograph would serve to illustrate the article more, although the infobox by itself is fine for a B class.

Just a few ideas. Once these have been addressed, you might like to seek re-assessment. This can be done by putting the article name in the appropriate section at WP:MHA. Cheers. AustralianRupert (talk) 05:16, 9 April 2009 (UTC)Reply