Talk:1992–93 South-West Indian Ocean cyclone season/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

  • "The 1992–93 South-West Indian Ocean cyclone season lasted longer than normal, with the first storm Aviona forming on September&nbspo;27 and the final storm Konita not dissipating until May 7." see something wrong here with the non-breaking space? :P YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • " Cyclone Colina formed and struck Réunion, which damaged houses and crops." how many? and any deaths? it seems odd you mention it without giving any number of homes/crops damaged. After reviewing it further, could you mention the 14 deaths instead of the damage? YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • "In mid-February, Tropical Storm Finella brought locally heavy rainfall to Réunion, reaching 1,074 mm (42.3 in) along the island's east coast and causing minimal rainfall along the southern coast." why mention it caused minimal rainfall along the southern coast if it was so minor? This article is about the season after all. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • " In addition, the JTWC estimated the system attained 1 minute sustained peak winds of 120 km/h (75 mph) on September 28, the equivalent of a minimal hurricane. " could you mention this before it was named? Seems weird not being in order. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • Actually, I think it'd be more confusing mentioning the JTWC peak before it was named. It is slightly weird, but the storm wasn't named operationally until after the JTWC thought it was a hurricane equivalent. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:49, 10 April 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • " A circulation developed within the system on January 13 about 400 km (250 mi) southwest of Diego Garcia, and at that time it became a tropical disturbance." Delink Diego Garcia given you link it in a previous section. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)Reply
Added a note. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00
  • 49, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
  • "After the subtropical depression dissipated, there were three additional depressions before Tropical Cyclone Colina developed on January 11." Any info about them? Or do you what the reader to not know anything about them cause they were boring? :P YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 9 April 2014 (UTC)Reply