Talk:1908 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:39, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "Saffir–Simpson hurricane wind scale" that should be explicitly linked. The previous link to a subsection of that article for "major hurricane" is a bit easter eggy, and most would ignore and just assume "big hurricane".

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "Most of the other systems impacted land." also impacted land?

• Agree, that sounds better--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "one indirect in" missing word?

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "leaving at least six fatalities" maybe "six people dead" to mix it up a little bit.

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "1900–09 Pacific hurricane seasons" -> "1900s Pacific hurricane seasons"

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "northeast of the Lesser Antilles" link.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "March 6, when" add the year in here, at least for the first time.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "ACE is, broadly speaking, a measure..." this is a really helpful explanation and probably should be a footnote, but it ends "have high ACEs", but there's no indication if 95 is high, low, or whatever.
• "observed in Basseterre, Saint Kitts and Nevis" then "of Basseterre on Saint Kitts" needs to be consistent and don't overlinked Basseterre.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "Turks and Caicos Islands. Moving" overlinked.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "March 6 – March 9" etc, for the same month, this just needs to be March 6–9 etc.
• "being Able in 1951 and Alma in 1970." both overlinked.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "became extratropical over " overlinked.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "985 mbar (hPa)" where is this referenced? Check all others.
• "In North Carolina, the" overlinked.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "on Marsh Island, Louisiana, at the" Louisiana overlinked.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "in the Bahamas several" overlinked.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "offshore Newfoundland. The" ditto.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "In the Turks and Caicos Islands, wind" same.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "100 mph (155 km/h)" isn't that 160 km/h??

• Yes--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "coast of Nova Scotia suffered " overlinked.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "strike the Abaco Islands before reaching" overlinked.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "east of Bermuda. The" likewise.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• Haiti is linked here abouts but "The Haitian sloop" was further up, should be linked there.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "destroyed. Eleuthera also reported" overlinked.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "pelted Bermuda, damaging" ditto.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "much loss of loss" eh?

• Meant to say "much loss of life"--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "west of Bermuda at " overlinked.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "southeast of Bermuda." same.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

• "northeast of French Guiana" same.

• Done--12george1 (talk) 21:56, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

That's it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:31, 30 August 2021 (UTC)