Template:Did you know nominations/'Til Kingdom Come (film)

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 21:53, 19 May 2022 (UTC)

'Til Kingdom Come (film)

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• ... that 'Til Kingdom Come, a documentary film about evangelical Christian Zionism in the United States, was blocked from airing on PBS due to its editing of a speech by Donald Trump?
  • ALT1: ... that according to Yael Eckstein, the 2020 documentary film 'Til Kingdom Come may reflect the political opinions of its creators?
  • ALT2: ... that 'Til Kingdom Come reportedly caused "a wave of guilt and soul-searching" in Israel?
  • Reviewed: Occupation of Catalina Island

Created by Ezlev (talk). Self-nominated at 03:35, 24 April 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Interesting article about a documentary, neutrally written. Of all 3 hooks, I found ALT0 to be the most interesting, ALT1 to be rather mundane, too political, or both, so I struck [it]. the other 2. While ALT0 is perfectly fine to use as is, I am offering my recommendation for a slightly different version of it in ALT0a as follows:

• • ALT0a: ... that the producers of the documentary 'Til Kingdom Come were found to have stitched together two parts of a Donald Trump speech, leading to its being blocked from airing on PBS? Havradim leaf a message 06:52, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
• Thanks so much for the review, Havradim! To clarify, do you mean to reject ALT1 and ALT2, or do you just prefer ALT0? ezlev (user/tlk/ctrbs) 07:33, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
  • I prefer ALT0 or its equivalent. ALT2 could also work in a pinch, but I found ALT1 to not really be engaging enough as a hook in my opinion. I am not really sure about how this assessment affects striking hooks - I thought it makes for easier work for the administrator - so if you need me to unstrike something I could do that, or you have my permission to unstrike as needed. Sorry for any misunderstanding. Havradim leaf a message 09:03, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Upon further contemplation, I am adding here what I believe is a "hookier" version of ALT2 for the benefit of the administrator:
  • ALT2a: ... that a documentary film reportedly caused "a wave of guilt and soul-searching" in Israel? Havradim leaf a message 01:01, 25 April 2022 (UTC)