Talk:Greg Renker
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The current "Family and community" section discusses Renker's relationship with the Eisenhower hospital, which appears to be a significant element of his biography. He credited them with saving his and his wife's life, helped them raise funds and made donations and buildings were named after him. Currently the article says "Renker serves as vice chairman of the Eisenhower Medical Center" using a secondary source (a profile in a local newspaper called the Desert Sun). I would like to supplement this secondary source with a primary one in order to update it with his new title (just Chairman, rather than Vice Chairman). CorporateM (Talk) 20:50, 9 February 2015 (UTC)
Editing neeeded
editThe transition from the first to second paragraph in both the lede and the Family and community section is too abrupt. He shouldn't be crediting a hospital for saving a life before even letting the reader know that the life was in jeopardy. I realize the information is at the end of the sentence, but that's poor placement.--S Philbrick(Talk) 14:20, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
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