Talk:Action of 24 June 1795
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review
 | Action of 24 June 1795 has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: December 19, 2017. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 20:40, 4 December 2017 (UTC)
I'll take this to review. Parsecboy (talk) 20:40, 4 December 2017 (UTC)
Not much to say:
- File:Capture of Minerve off Toulon.jpg - needs a US tag - {{PD-US}} should apply.
- There are a couple of duplicate links (to cannon and broadside in the explanatory text for the table) that ought to be removed, and the second link to William James in the reference section can easily go as well.
- I'd italicize French ranks like Contre-amiral
- What type of ship was Illustrious? Ditto for Agamemnon
- "...were focused on capturing the island of Corsica, prosecuting sieges..." - should be "Corsica and prosecuting"
Nice work. Parsecboy (talk) 21:17, 4 December 2017 (UTC)
- Apologies, because the article didn't go on hold, I hadn't realised that the review was complete! All done, thanks for the review.--Jackyd101 (talk) 00:20, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
- No problem, I lost track of it myself, or I'd have pinged you! I'm happy to pass the article now. Parsecboy (talk) 02:00, 19 December 2017 (UTC)