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editThis is a well organized, easy to read article. I think it is very informative and has a lot of good info. The only suggestion I would make is to include more information about California. Specifically, the sections dealing with energy use, materials and waste, air and atmosphere, etc., have a lot of good info but do not focus on California. For example, diesel is the most common airborne toxin that Californians breathe.Lena815 (talk) 05:09, 16 April 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for your suggestions, I will consider them to complete my article. Vince005 (talk) 20:34, 19 April 2011 (UTC)
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editIn trying to de-orphan this article I was searching for other article to link to this one. I think it may fit in Green building in the United States#California, but I wasn't sure exactly how to incorporate it, maybe the author of this article can do so. Maximilianklein (talk) 20:03, 3 May 2011 (UTC)
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editI believe that the article is not a copyright violation. The first image is the cover of an official document of the State of California. All the parts of the article have references and the content of the policy is taken from the policy itself.
The words contained in the article are the same as those contained in the code because there is no better way to describe the code than using the words contained in it. Vince005 (talk) 08:21, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
I agree. From glancing through at least three of the duplication detector reports, all of the significant matches are terms like "the california building standards commission". I don't see any close paraphrasing or copyright violation.--Sage Ross - Online Facilitator, Wikimedia Foundation (talk) 15:41, 13 May 2011 (UTC)- Actually, it looks like there are some significant issues in the text that has been removed; they don't show up when the duplication detector is run on the current version of the article, but see this Duplication Detector report, for example. Using extended sections of identical or very similar phrasing should be avoided.--Sage Ross - Online Facilitator, Wikimedia Foundation (talk) 15:51, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
I saw the report. The 4 sentences that are the same as the article of SF Gate had references. I don't understand what is the problem. Is it because it's not possible to use the same words of another article even if there is the reference? If this is the case I could modify the article using other words. Vince005 (talk) 18:21, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
I created a new page about Calgreen (2010 California Green Building Standards Code/Temp). I hope now the article is ok. Let me know. Thanks. Vince005 (talk) 23:03, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
- Any text (unless otherwise noted) used in the article from http://www.hcd.ca.gov/ is public domain as you can read here under 'Ownership'. Other California public records are public domain as well. This text from here appears to be copyrighted and needs to removed or rewritten. There is also text copied and pasted from http://www.wbdg.org/resources/cwmgmt.php which I am unsure of because a U.S. Federal Gov't employee wrote it. I will comment on it at this article's entry at Wikipedia:Copyright problems/2011 May 13. Also, if using public domain text, be sure to attribute the source as I did here.--NortyNort (Holla) 09:50, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
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