Rahuljc

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 05:13, 28 August 2016 (UTC)

Feedback request

I got your request for feedback, so I took a look at your sandbox. It's a good start, but a few things that need doing

1. Only the article title should be bolded
2. You used numbered references. These are almost impossible to maintain in the long run. Please use inline references instead.
3. Each statement in the article needs to be directly connected with a supporting citation
4. Only proper nouns should be capitalized (although abbreviations like BI can be as well). Section headers should use sentence, not title capitalization - only the first word should be capitalized.
5. Any term that the average reader might be unfamiliar with should be linked. That way readers can find out more about the topic.
6. Wikipedia articles don't have introductions, they have lead sections. Please see pages 7-9 of the Editing Wikipedia brochure. You should have received a hard copy from your instructor, but just in case, I have linked to it above.
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   Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:45, 24 October 2016 (UTC)

Follow up

Per above

1.  Done
2.  Done
3. Any content after the last reference in a paragraph is effectively unsourced.  Not done
4. Didn't even try[1]  Not done
5. Only a few terms are linked.  Not done
6. Changing the name of the section doesn't change it into a lead section.  Not done

You still haven't done most of what I asked you to do last time. Please do those things before asking me for additional feedback. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:03, 5 December 2016 (UTC)