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editFinal_War_of_the_Roman_Republic nothing is cited? I don't know if its supposed to be like that. the only links lead to other Wikipedia pages. does not seem like there could be alot to be improved.
https://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Janie%27s_Got_a_Gun Has a lot of sources. The external links go to websites, that no longer have the information they where trying to display. I wish all the names they use had links to wiki pages.
[Walk The Line]: this article is missing some information. I would like to know more about the history of Johnny cash as a musician. I also thought the plot section could be summarized. there are not a lot of great sources for this movie. Almost all the sources are reviews that are opinionated.
Talk:2010_Japan_Series No cited information. I like how the charts work. The article stays neutral. The article could use more pictures.
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editVisual_communication: Some of the terminology is explained to in depth. I think they should just add links to definitions. there is some biased information with out citation."Aldous Huxley is regarded as one of the most prominent explorers of visual communication and sight-related theories." There are a couple of sources, most of the sources are from schools. All the content is relevant to the topic.
Additional source: Visual Communication Theory/History https://study.com/academy/lesson/what-is-visual-communication-definition-history-theory-examples.html Visual Communication Job/work related https://learn.org/articles/What_is_Visual_Communications.html https://www.chemeketa.edu/programs-classes/program-finder/visual-communications/
Waterfront Blues Festival: Seems to be missing some information. I would like to know more about the culture of people that go. both links do not work. The blues festival has that could be add to the article . The website seems to be a great source for the article. There are also interviews and news article on the festival that would improve the article.
Additional source: Blues Fest website http://www.waterfrontbluesfest.com/ Radio article https://kboo.fm/waterfront-blues-festival-kboo-celebrating-25-years-playing-blues-fighting-hunger Magazine article https://www.vrtxmag.com/articles/on-the-waterfront/
Police_cadet This article is very undeveloped. There is no links or cited information. I found a lot of information from sources, about what a police cadet is and does. Most sources are from police stations talking about their cadet program.
Additional source: Police cadet overview https://www.milwaukieoregon.gov/police/police-cadet-program-overview How to become cadet https://golawenforcement.com/police-cadet/ Job outlook https://www.glassdoor.com/Job/police-cadet-jobs-SRCH_KO0,12.htm
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The Blues Festival over looks the Willamette river. where a fire work show can be seen. put on by the city of Portland Every 4th of July. [1]
After the festival closes for the day. Guest can go to a after party and see some of the musicians and bands. The after party is located at the Marriott Hotel.
Waterfront Blues Festival has a Blues Cruise. The Blues Cruise features a different musician from the festival everyday. A full bar and buffet are on every cruise and dancing is encouraged. The Blues Cruise was created for the audience be in a more intimate setting with the blues musicians.
STAGE INFORMATION
There are four stages for artist to play on. The stages are: Front Porch Stage, Crossroad Stage, Blues Stage, and Brewery Stage. [2] Each stage has a different theme and atmosphere. The Front Porch Stage has a Louisiana bayou theme, The Crossroad Stage has Interviews and workshops, The Blues stage is smaller so the audience can see and interact with the artist better, the Brewery Stage is the main stage and host all the headlining artist.[3]
Donations
The Sunshine Division is a local partners with the Waterfront Blues Festival for 30 years. Patrons of the Festival can donate money, or food to help fight hunger in Portland. [4] The Sunshine Division offers volunteers and volunteer management for the festival.[5]
Art
Every year there is a new poster for the Waterfront Blues Festival. The artist is Gary Houston. Gary Huston has been making the iconic poster art for the festival for eighteen years. [6]
References
edit- ^ "FESTIVAL EXPERIENCE". Waterfront Blues Festival.
- ^ "Stage Map".
- ^ "Stage details".
- ^ "Donations".
- ^ "Waterfront Blues Festival". Sunshine Division. Retrieved 2019-02-17.
- ^ "Poster Art". Koin 6.