Talk:Sultanate of Zanzibar

Latest comment: 1 month ago by 62.73.72.3 in topic Moved from lede


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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2019 and 12 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Markricardo22.

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Area size

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That area was so much than current Zanzibar which is 2500 sq km so it can’t be then it was just 2600 sq km. I think we need a revision Nlivataye (talk) 09:57, 11 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

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'The revolution was very brutal with casualties leading from 2,000-20,000 and the ASP’s brutal methods included killing, murdering and sometimes even raping Arabs.'

First, this sounds very POV and should be sourced before it is added. Second, almost all revolutions include the 'very brutal method' of killing, and most violent conflicts include 'sometimes even' incidents of rape. Pointing it out explicitly for this particular revolution seems biased. Third, the repetition 'killing and murdering' sounds silly. Fourth, the 'sometimes even' makes it sound as if raping a person is a more brutal act than murdering them, which seems silly, too. 62.73.72.3 (talk) 15:37, 27 August 2024 (UTC)Reply