Talk:St. Anne School (Columbus, Georgia)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Moray An Par (talk) 07:39, 1 July 2011 (UTC)

July 4 read

• Link to http://www.sasphs.net/tuition.htm is dead.
• Is "St. Anne‒Pacelli" the correct dash? Or should it be a hyphen? If the saint's name is Anne-Pacelli then it should be a hyphen but if the school is named after St. Anne and some other person named Pacelli then it should be an en dash as it is now.
• Lead is soooooo short. It should summarize the article. Expand it. See WP:LEAD.
• The infobox should also summarize the salient points of the article. I find it weird that Reverend Monsignor Herman J. Deimel wasn't mentioned in the body.
• If it's not affiliated with Muscogee County School District, why should it be mentioned?
• What is ref three citing for? The whole history section? If so then it should be cited in every sentence/paragraph whereever necessary. Same case for athletics section.
• Use en dashes to indicate duration. 1958–2008 → 1958–2008. See WP:DASH.
• Paragraph two of Academics section is not cited.
• Do not external link Nathan Rustin Fitness Center. See WP:EL.
• Do not list facilities. Describe only those which are remarkable.
• Get more references, especially third-party ones.
• Please see WP:WPSCH/AG. This article doesn't follow it. I am going to fail this. Consider renominating after adhering to the guidelines and getting a copy-edit from the WP:GUILD.

Moray An Par (talk) 01:52, 4 July 2011 (UTC)