Talk:Spike Spiegel/GA1
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Tintor2 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 23:05, 26 November 2015 (UTC)
Okay, I'll be doing the review of Spike.
- The lead could be quite expanded considering the large reception the character has. I would recommend three paragraphs.
- Another in the lead: To follow the order of the sections, the voice actors should be mentioned before the reception.
- Moving on to the section "In other media" is it necessary to comment the movie could or not be Spike's dream? It could fall into WP:Trivia in a future FAN
- Is there something notable (or unique) about the mangas that could be used to expand the section?
- Also the same with the video games.
- The reception section seems fine but DVD Talk is linked in the second time rather than the first time.
These were all issues I found in the article. It is well written, I expect to pass it in a short time. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 23:05, 26 November 2015 (UTC)
- @Tintor2: I've done my best to address the comments above. About the manga and video games, I haven't found enough information to expand things by much. --ProtoDrake (talk) 09:32, 27 November 2015 (UTC)
- Passed. Good work.Tintor2 (talk) 13:54, 27 November 2015 (UTC)