Shiori Fujisaki is currently a Video games good article nominee. Nominated by Cukie Gherkin (talk) at 11:05, 24 November 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria and will decide whether or not to list it as a good article. Comments are welcome from any editor who has not nominated or contributed significantly to this article. This review will be closed by the first reviewer. To add comments to this review, click discuss review and edit the page. Short description: Tokimeki Memorial character |
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Nominator: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 11:05, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 03:04, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
Six GA Criteria
edit1. Article is well-written. Very minimal mistakes if any at all.
2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.
3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the character.
4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.
5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.
6. Article uses one fair use image with proper rationale.
Lead
edit-Mention her game series was made by Konami
-This has earned her the nickname the "Last Boss of Dating Sims". Very unclear, specify that this is among fans of the series.
Appearances
edit-Any more information on the idol part? It seems odd that it only covers the first appearance and nothing else.
Concept and creation
edit-Looks good
Reception
edit-"Shiori's debut single "Oshiete Mr. Sky"," Is this as a virtual idol?
-"Mami Kingetsu's CD debut of Shiori was a particularly exciting moment for Chi Bi" This seems largely unassociated with the points surrounding it regarding Shiori's role in the dating sim.
-Is an academic textbook really a reliable source? This seems mostly for educational purposes for academic institutions, and to my knowledge these don't tend to be usable sources for articles.
Overall
edit-@Cukie Gherkin: Not a requirement, but I'd suggest using the sources on the talk page to bolster the current article's coverage. This will help with its depth of coverage. Overall looking decent, let me know if you need any clarification.