Talk:Rachel Haot

Latest comment: 3 months ago by MaskedSinger in topic Improve Article

Digital Roadmap section

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Surely this should be moved to its own article? Wwwhatsup (talk) 01:36, 16 November 2013 (UTC)Reply

Agree, it's too detailed. The article is about Haot, not the digital roadmap. Perhaps @Asterixie: can tell us what she thinks. §FreeRangeFrogcroak 02:07, 16 November 2013 (UTC)Reply

Clean Up

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As noted above, this article was originally written by the subject. I am finding a lot on the page that is, not neutral, and arguably self serving. So for example, the article implied she was hired by Mayor Bloomberg, but according to news accounts she was actually hired by Katherine Oliver - someone much further down in the administration - (I have made this correction). Some of the stuff that is "accurate" cites blogs and what appear to me to be unreliable sources Anyway, as time permits I will be doing some clean-up.NYC.Geek (talk) 16:46, 15 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Improve Article

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Came across this article and will do what I can to straighten it out. MaskedSinger (talk) 07:56, 20 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

I made some changes, improved the layout and structure and am going to remove the tag. MaskedSinger (talk) 08:02, 22 August 2024 (UTC)Reply