Talk:Julia Maesa

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Iazyges in topic GA Review

Younger sister?

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Julia Domna's article states she was born five years before Maesa, so how can she be Maesa's younger sister? Clarityfiend (talk) 22:50, 3 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

She in fact isn't. Julia Domna was born in 160 while Maesa was born in 165, I corrected it now after I rewrote the article from scratch.Jadd Haidar (talk) 22:06, 22 June 2018 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 19:32, 22 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:32, 22 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
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    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y
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  • No DAB links  Y
  • No dead links  Y
  • No missing citations  N
  • No Sourcing issues N
I have removed the Sellars source because it was self-published, and replaced it with a Levick source. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:27, 22 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Prose Suggestions

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Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • was a 3rd century Augusta of the Roman Empire and a powerful, prominent and influential figure in the empire's politics during the rule of the Severan dynasty. suggest:
    was a 3rd century Augusta (empress) of the Roman Empire and a powerful and influential figure in the empire's politics during the rule of the Severan dynasty.
  • She bore him two daughters, Julia Soaemias and Julia Mamaea,[5] who would later both became mothers of emperors Elagabalus and Severus Alexander respectively. suggest removing "both".
  • To tie up loose ends as it were, you may desire to mention that Diadumedian was "captured en route in Zeugma, and executed in late June.", you can grab the citation of the Diadumedian article if you add the information.
  • @Jadd Haidar: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:34, 30 July 2018 (UTC)Reply