HMS Resistance (1801) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: August 12, 2022. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:20, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
Might be a day or two until I can review it but I will review this. Hog Farm Talk 03:20, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
- "During the French Revolutionary War frigate designs were often lengthened to increase sailing speeds" - can it be clarified as to why these increased speeds were considered necessary?
- Clarified
- "Resistance was launched on 29 April 1801 with the following dimensions: 146 feet 1+1⁄4 inches (44.5 m) along the upper deck, 122 feet 1 inch (37.2 m) at the keel," - presumably this is a length figure but that could be stated more directly
- Clarified
- " where the privateer was sold for around £6–7,000" - recommend spelling out the former figure of 6,000 pounds in full, as it could currently be read as a rather large range from 6 pounds to the 7,000
- Done
I think that's all from me, well-written. Hog Farm Talk 22:20, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
- @Hog Farm: Hi, thanks for the review. Have replied above. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 23:12, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.