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Tone tag
editThis text in the current version of the article sums up why I've tagged it as having a {{tone}} issue:
- After a very impressive debut year in 2009, Gary perfected his 2 extreme dives and entered the 2010 season full of confidence and promise.
Impressive per whom? Perfected according to whom? Has he gotten only perfect marks for them in 2010; otherwise, how can we empirically say they're perfected? How can we verify he's full of confidence and promise?
While I think there's notability for the athlete—particularly for his Commonwealth Games medal, which is not (yet) mentioned in the article—I think a lot of the text needs recast as neutral encyclopedia text. —C.Fred (talk) 17:35, 31 January 2011 (UTC)
Out Of Date
editThis article is so out of date. If no one cares then it should be deleted. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 94.9.217.161 (talk) 10:07, 30 September 2012 (UTC)