Talk:Don Zimmerman (lacrosse)/GA1

GA Review

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Overall, this article is pretty good. However, I noticed the following issues:

• If the references have the author's name, I'd like to see them added in.
• The lead feels a lil on the short side, but seeing as how the article's not that long I'm not too worried.
• Seems kinda odd that he attended three schools. Know of any specific reason for this? Nevermind, first one's a high school. Though if there's a sourced reason for his transfer it would be a nice addition.
• Any more information about the Loyola tenure? Half a sentence for three years feels a lil short.
• "Zimmerman coached the South squad in the 2002 North-South Senior All-Star Game" either a link to it or a short description of what it is would be nice (I'm pretty sure i know what the north-south game is, but i could be wrong)

Otherwise, this article's good. I'll put it on hold, and I expect the stuff will be taken care of pretty quickly since it's minor changes. Wizardman 04:20, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

After re-reading it, I'm satisfied with the changes and will pass the article. Wizardman 02:44, 13 July 2009 (UTC)