Talk:Doctor Who series 11/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:34, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:34, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good.
• Lead is also in great shape.

Episodes

• "on board" → "onboard"

 Done Chompy Ace 04:47, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• "The Woman Who Fell to Earth" is 223 words, so try shortening it per MOS:TVPLOT.

 Done episode 1 now 191 words. Chompy Ace 22:04, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• "the group locate" → "the group locates"

 Done Chompy Ace 04:48, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• "the group learn" → "the group learns"

 Done Chompy Ace 04:49, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• "offspring to" → "offspring of"

 Done Chompy Ace 04:46, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "Graham, Yasmin".

 Done Chompy Ace 04:40, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• "space-station" → "space station"

 Done Chompy Ace 04:45, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "removes it".

 Done Chompy Ace 04:41, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• "group arrive" → "group arrives"

 Done Chompy Ace 04:48, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• "staff have" → "staff has"

 Done Chompy Ace 04:46, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "Yasmin, Ryan".

 Done Chompy Ace 04:39, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• "The Witchfinders" is 210 words, so try shortening it per MOS:TVPLOT.

 Done episode 8 now 187 words. Chompy Ace 22:18, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• "during 1612" → "in 1612"

 Done Chompy Ace 04:37, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• "Afterwards" → "Afterward"

 Done Chompy Ace 04:37, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

Casting

• Remove the comma after "later in 2017".

 Done Chompy Ace 04:23, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• "Matt Lucas or Pearl Mackie" → "Matt Lucas nor Pearl Mackie"

 Done Chompy Ace 04:21, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "Ryan Sinclair".

 Done Chompy Ace 04:23, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• Everything else is really well-sourced.

 Already done Chompy Ace 04:23, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

• Improve the non-free rationales for both images with this template.

 Not done images have been removed due to the template says No purpose specified. Please edit this image description and provide a purpose.; both images placed in prose rather than infobox. Chompy Ace 21:36, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

I've restored the images with the linked template and a specified purpose; images are not required to be in the infobox to have a purpose. Cheers. -- /Alex/₂₁ 03:58, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

• Feels weird to have both #Music and #Soundtrack sections. Could they be merged?

 Done merged Chompy Ace 04:33, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

Release

• "web site" → "website"

 Done Chompy Ace 04:25, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add commas after "Cole, Chibnall", "Kazakhstani", and "Cole, Walsh".

 Done Chompy Ace 04:28, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the commas after "October 2018" and "Sundays was a first in the programme's history".

 Done Chompy Ace 04:31, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception

• This section looks good.

Soundtrack

• This section also looks good so a merge with #Music doesn't seem too complicated.

 Done moved to #Music Chompy Ace 04:33, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind, but I've re-separated this section back out for conformity with the past ten series articles (or twelve, given the specials), which all have their own separate Soundtrack sections at the end of the article. -- /Alex/₂₁ 08:57, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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